Mine was similar; I loved leading Marines, and wanted to lead Marines at a higher level of influence this was long before I had the interest or the chance to earn an aviation contract, so flying was not part of the equation yet. So, you come to an Internet forum asking for a critique of your essay from strangers. The other thread discussed all of this already regarding your grammar, and yet, you still made the same errors. Becoming a Commissioned Officer would be a challenge I would like to accept. I'm not saying to exagerate. Other than that from a fellow Air Force member, looks good. Although I am currently a Specialist without any Soldiers my peers always look to me for guidance.
Without giving away my literary jewel that I call my essay, I would like to share my reasoning for why I want to be an Army officer. Undoubtedly an organization I want to be a part of. During my undergraduate years, I was actively involved in the leadership of my campus and the local community. I cannot think of a better place to serve our great nation than in the U. I also learned that a police presence was the best tool in deterring crime and. It was the most selfless act I could do for my family and the country that had allowed me to continue to be a member of its society.
Hello, My name is Chris, I'm 39 yrs old. Every prior enlisted guy is older. Why wouldn't I want to be a member of an elite few, a member of the most valuable one percentile? I have adopted the Army values and made them my own. For others, increased responsibility, the desire to drive the ship, the plane, or eventually maybe the path to Command. I was excited by how the doctors and the nurses worked together to save the victims that were rushed into the ward. I by no means feel that I have all of the answers, but I feel that I do have the drive for knowledge and the ability to make good decisions with authority and leadership.
I remember being at the academy with my classmates as we talked about what we would like to accomplish in the fire department. I first considered joining the Army during college. I started to understand the role of the police was not as a symbol of power, but one of peace. We usually pick out the assignment. If you would like to see mine, private message me. Ultimately my answer is simple.
Why would I not want to be a leading member of the greatest Army in the greatest nation the world have ever seen and will ever see? What makes a great leader is how he or she uses their experiences to become better leaders and how they apply that knowledge gained from their experiences to shape future leaders. The learning cycle defined by Kolb 1984 in order to survive to the central theme or idea. Over the years, I have also had a chance to see and experience training and missions as an enlisted soldier. Any numbers under 10 are spelled out, like two vs. I believe people have the right to a peaceful assembly.
Though my studies required it, I have never been interested in the architecture or the workings of countries beyond the United States. That is a different ball of wax. Why do I want to become an U. Being an army officer requires demonstrating and embodying leadership — it is the most important role of being an army officer. I knew in that instant that I raised my right hand that all of the hard work and sacrifice up to that point had paid off, and that many great things were still to come.
The price paid for success is sacrifice! Since the sheriff from the nearest town has to drive for two hours in his regular patrol, I have taken the initiative of engaging the locals to stay vigilant and inform one another of any suspected activity within the area. I know what it means for soldiers to be away from their relatives and friends and how the family members feel, as well. I think it is a strong essay, but I feel it needs a lot of editing from a grammatical aspect. Why I want to be an Army Officer When I first enlisted, I did not know where my military career would take me. All officers are soldiers first and I will make it a priority to remember this and to live by the Army core values no matter where my career as an officer takes me.
Lastly, you want to keep it as professional as possible. What does society expect from me as a military officer? Success is to achieve goals, you have set. If your doing history for gcse stop it. ~~ Again, if my math is correct you are 29, they are also your peers. In career, there are paths a person might choose to pursue depending on their passion and career objective. In becoming an Army Officer I can further develop these qualities which are key in handling troops. I was born and raised in Johor Bahru.